The first of my western romance series (yet to be named) Mark of the Sire is a historical, soft romance to be released in Dec. (Pop over to the contest page to take part in naming the series.) The following are unedited excerpts so please forgive any typos. When Catherine left Chicago leaving behind shame and heart break, she never expected to be thrown into chaos or for the source of her heartbreak to follow. The quirt swished
through the air and cracked to viciously split
cloth and skin. The child, a gangly adolescent, did not cry out. He ground his
teeth together to keep the screams of pain trapped in his throat. The screams
of helplessness and horror came from Lars, a child of the same age, and his
Mama. Neither was strong enough to stop the brutal whipping though both tried
desperately. Despite Sam Fetchen’s skeletal build, both were thrown back
repeatedly. The only consolation for
Excerpt # 2
Never in her life
had Catherine seen a man more filthy or mean looking. He was of medium height
and gaunt. His hair was long, uncut, unkempt, and matted. He had a growth of
facial hair, not long enough to call a beard, and it was encrusted with
partials of food from past meals. All the creases in his face, hands, neck, and
even his clothes were filled with dirt, and his clothes were patched and worn
to rags.
“Looken fer my
boy,” the man said.
“No Fetchen in
here,” Brivers retorted. “I don’t want my place smelling. You get out."
“Ya’d let
Brivers gasped and
paled. Fetchen chuckled and moved closer. He taunted maliciously while Brivers
backed away. “Might be he’s har now, waiten fer his ole pa.”
“No, no,” Brivers
said faintly.
Catherine backed
off as well. Not because she felt threatened as Brivers obviously did, but
because the man’s body odor was offensive. Her movement took his eyes to her.
“Who you be?”
“Who I am is none
of your concern.” His manner and condition disgusted her so she turned away.
His bony fingers
clutched her arm. “Ya won’t be talking like dat ta
She hissed back,
“If he is as dirty, smelly, and rude as you are, I will,” and jerked to free
her arm.
Except #3
The man was Lars’
age, middle twenties, and he hesitated at the door to get his bearings. He was
tall, nearly as tall as Lars, with broad shoulders. Under the heavy sheep skin
coat you could tell where Lars was thick and massive of muscle, this man’s body
tapered to slim hips and long legs. He had light brown hair peeking out from
under his hat, but his eyes were dark brown.
His looked to be a
man coming in from the cold in search of a warm place to sleep. Saddle bags and
blanket roll were over his right shoulder, and a rifle was in his left hand.
His right hand was still on the door knob and both hands were still covered
with gloves against the bitter cold outside. To hesitate before entering a
strange room was normal. The next wasn’t. He glance fell on Catherine, and her
expression of hatred held his attention in puzzlement.
Lars jumped to his
feet, turned over his chair and yelled. The room exploded. The roar of multiple
gunshots was deafening, and the man was flung back out the door by force of the
slugs tearing into his body.
Excerpt # 4
“That man is a gun
fighter,” Charles said stiffly. “Get him out of my house now.”
“You don’t know
who he is, and you do not have the right to judge him,” Catherine told him and
turned Charles’ rage back on him.
“You repay our
kindness by defying me, flaunting your indiscretions, and—”
“You didn’t take
me in; you sent a request for help. If Papa had known what you had in your
mind, he would never have let me come. If I had known, I never would have
accepted.
“You had little
choice after the way you shamed yourself and your family.”
“I came for
reasons of my own, not because of some petty gossip.”
“That man is as
bad as the other one.” He pointed at Chancy. “He makes his living with that.”
He pointed to the gun still tied to Chancy’s thigh. They had not taken the time
to remove it, and the twisting from Lars attempting to lift him had uncovered it.
“They’re both murderers.”


Excerpt:
Candles lit the room and a fire was built, again
courtesy of Kari and with the same degree of appreciation shown as there had
been for the two meals she had provided for them. The four sat at a small
table, Steven reluctantly. Kari's single refusal to join them had been
accepted. His four attempts to refuse had been rejected. Even when Kari came in
and took a seat off to the side on a delicate settee to watch in that intent
way of hers, no invitations were made for her to join them at the table.
Caroleigh took charge. "We start by calling
forth the spirit."
"How does one do that?" Evelyn asked.
"Here ghosty, ghosty," Edward teased, drawing
a nervous giggle from Evelyn and a scowl from Caroleigh.
"Be serious or it won't work," Caroleigh
ordered.
"I must say I'm not sure I want it to,"
Edward drawled. "He did give Emily rather a nasty start."
"Because she wasn't expecting it. It would
help if we knew his name."
"I don't believe introductions were made, but
one would assume it was daddy."
"One must never assume. Now join hands, close
your eyes and concentrate." She waited long enough for her orders to be
obeyed, then began. "Oh, spirit of the house, speak to us. Speak to us
now."
They all fell into silence with the only other
sound the abnormally loud ticking of a mantle clock. "Oh, spirit, speak to—"
A noise started. Low at first, it gained in volume
as it drew nearer them. A sharp, irregular wail pierced the ears and a chilled
cold swept over them, puckering flesh with goose bumps and causing chills.
"Oh," Evelyn gasped, letting go of hands
to rub her arms and look around frantically as the sound grew in volume,
heading towards them.
"Whatever…?" Edward began and strangled
off with a gasp of his own.
The sound of a crash reverberated off the walls followed by a violent buck of the table beneath their hands. Edward was suddenly on his feet with another crash slamming their senses. Evelyn screamed, jumped to her feet, stood for a moment in indecision and then started to run. A split second later, she screamed again and fell with a thud to the floor. Before one scream faded, she screamed yet a third time when the room blazed into bright light.
Reviews:This well thought out plot is heightened by several bite-sized chunks of
family history, supplying the sturdy and intelligent cast of characters with
credibility and warmth. The
possibility that the mansion could be haunted also adds to the tension and
drama, as does the pressure put upon Kari who is deeply involved with a suspect.
This novel has romance,
mystery, intrigue and portrays a sense of 'who done it?' to keep you hooked
right through the end. Another aspect I enjoyed about this lighthearted mystery is
Larion Wills' portrayal of the droll, British Edward Van Philips. He has
a dry, but highly amusing sense of humour that made me smile along with him, and you can’t help noticing
his heart is in the right place.