
The quirt swished
through the air and cracked to viciously split
cloth and skin. The child, a gangly adolescent, did not cry out. He ground his
teeth together to keep the screams of pain trapped in his throat. The screams
of helplessness and horror came from Lars, a child of the same age, and his
Mama. Neither was strong enough to stop the brutal whipping though both tried
desperately. Despite Sam Fetchen�s skeletal build, both were thrown back
repeatedly. The only consolation for
Excerpt # 2
Never in her life
had Catherine seen a man more filthy or mean looking. He was of medium height
and gaunt. His hair was long, uncut, unkempt, and matted. He had a growth of
facial hair, not long enough to call a beard, and it was encrusted with
partials of food from past meals. All the creases in his face, hands, neck, and
even his clothes were filled with dirt, and his clothes were patched and worn
to rags.
�Looken fer my
boy,� the man said.
�No Fetchen in
here,� Brivers retorted. �I don�t want my place smelling. You get out."
�Ya�d let
Brivers gasped and
paled. Fetchen chuckled and moved closer. He taunted maliciously while Brivers
backed away. �Might be he�s har now, waiten fer his ole pa.�
�No, no,� Brivers
said faintly.
Catherine backed
off as well. Not because she felt threatened as Brivers obviously did, but
because the man�s body odor was offensive. Her movement took his eyes to her.
�Who you be?�
�Who I am is none
of your concern.� His manner and condition disgusted her so she turned away.
His bony fingers
clutched her arm. �Ya won�t be talking like dat ta
She hissed back,
�If he is as dirty, smelly, and rude as you are, I will,� and jerked to free
her arm.
Except #3
The man was Lars�
age, middle twenties, and he hesitated at the door to get his bearings. He was
tall, nearly as tall as Lars, with broad shoulders. Under the heavy sheep skin
coat you could tell where Lars was thick and massive of muscle, this man�s body
tapered to slim hips and long legs. He had light brown hair peeking out from
under his hat, but his eyes were dark brown.
His looked to be a
man coming in from the cold in search of a warm place to sleep. Saddle bags and
blanket roll were over his right shoulder, and a rifle was in his left hand.
His right hand was still on the door knob and both hands were still covered
with gloves against the bitter cold outside. To hesitate before entering a
strange room was normal. The next wasn�t. He glance fell on Catherine, and her
expression of hatred held his attention in puzzlement.
Lars jumped to his
feet, turned over his chair and yelled. The room exploded. The roar of multiple
gunshots was deafening, and the man was flung back out the door by force of the
slugs tearing into his body.
Excerpt # 4
�That man is a gun
fighter,� Charles said stiffly. �Get him out of my house now.�
�You don�t know
who he is, and you do not have the right to judge him,� Catherine told him and
turned Charles� rage back on him.
�You repay our
kindness by defying me, flaunting your indiscretions, and��
�You didn�t take
me in; you sent a request for help. If Papa had known what you had in your
mind, he would never have let me come. If I had known, I never would have
accepted.
�You had little
choice after the way you shamed yourself and your family.�
�I came for
reasons of my own, not because of some petty gossip.�
�That man is as
bad as the other one.� He pointed at Chancy. �He makes his living with that.�
He pointed to the gun still tied to Chancy�s thigh. They had not taken the time
to remove it, and the twisting from Lars attempting to lift him had uncovered it.
�They�re both murderers.�
When I read the back of the book blurb for Mark
of the Sire by Larion Wills, I thought I'd be dealing with a period
romance that might not be my cup of tea. I was especially thrown by the title,
which seemed to place the book more in English realms than in Colorado.
But after reading a contemporary adventure /
romance by the same author, I knew that there would be a good story in between
the relationship issues. And, you know, I really liked Mark of the Sire!
Maybe I'm just not accustomed to the wide scope of the romance genre, but I
found this novel to be more of a psychological western than just a romance (a
girl gets guy story). It had the feel of old Bonanza or High
Chaparral TV episodes that dealt with more behind the bad guy than an evil
look, a black hat, and a fast gun.
Mark of the Sire tells
the story of the ill-fated Van Anders and Fletcher families and their attempts
to settle the Colorado Rockies. Enter spunky Catherine Lincoln, the daughter of
a New York physician, who has fled to her uncle's ranch and his strict and
limited vision of what a woman's place was. Cathy soon finds herself in the
midst of gun battles and revenge as she tries to come to the aid of two very
handsome young men. Her attempts at patching them up medically leads to gossip
and danger.
Mark of the Sire is a fast-paced Wild West adventure with touches of humor and pathos. Larion Wills weaves a complex story of family loyalty and forgotten love. Highly recommended.